Quite an interesting project, more interesting because it is made in Ren'py. I like the overall plot of the game and the monsters and what they represent, the combat is also really fun to play.
Obviously my only suggestion would be to give it a more unified graphic style, preferably not using assets from random people without the proper rights; If this is a personal project for fun I guess that's no big deal but if you plan to expand on this I suggest taking special care on that aspect.
"More unified graphic" : you are right. I'm working on a shader technique to unify different graphic without resorting to pixel-art/pixelization like many games do. The next game will have a more professional look (even if visual will remain my weak point).
Seems interesting, though I think it'd be nice if you credited the folks whose art you used and/or simply put a disclaimer on the page that these aren't your assets/are free assets/aren't the final assets?
I'd be curious about the artistic future of the project, considering it's marked "in development". :) Thanks!
Thank you for taking the time to comment and for this constructive criticism. The game already contained credits but now I added them on the itch.io page !
For the future of this project, I hope to expend on the same universe where the player meet, fight or partner with incarnations of societal concepts (like Justice, Order, etc...). I also hope to give it a more political tone, so that different factions have different socio-economic models (capitalism, individualisme, socialism, etc...) embedded both in the gameplay and the background.
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Obviously my only suggestion would be to give it a more unified graphic style, preferably not using assets from random people without the proper rights; If this is a personal project for fun I guess that's no big deal but if you plan to expand on this I suggest taking special care on that aspect.
Thanks for feedbacks ! it's very helpful.
"More unified graphic" : you are right. I'm working on a shader technique to unify different graphic without resorting to pixel-art/pixelization like many games do. The next game will have a more professional look (even if visual will remain my weak point).
Seems interesting, though I think it'd be nice if you credited the folks whose art you used and/or simply put a disclaimer on the page that these aren't your assets/are free assets/aren't the final assets?
I'd be curious about the artistic future of the project, considering it's marked "in development".
:) Thanks!
Thank you for taking the time to comment and for this constructive criticism. The game already contained credits but now I added them on the itch.io page !
Thanks a ton for reading my comment and making a chance-- as an artist who works on games, I really appreciate that!
For the future of this project, I hope to expend on the same universe where the player meet, fight or partner with incarnations of societal concepts (like Justice, Order, etc...). I also hope to give it a more political tone, so that different factions have different socio-economic models (capitalism, individualisme, socialism, etc...) embedded both in the gameplay and the background.
Sounds cool! Good luck!